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“We’re almost there! 15 years have passed since I last stood in this spot. See that roof? That’s the cabin. That wasn’t visible from this spot, once upon a time. Not sure how we’re gonna get across the muck that was once a gentle, babbling brook. And those steps, once solid and surrounded by a forest of green, look pretty questionable now. That cabin was once a safe haven. My happy, hidden place. It’s not on any map. I hope it’s still safe. Take care and keep your head low, though. The world has changed. It might already be occupied.”
It’s been a while since I’ve made time for the Friday Fictioneers. Here’s my 100 words inspired by the photo. Thanks to Rochelle for keeping it going. Thanks also to Karen for the photo.
Christine said:
I am glad you have returned to writing these snapshots. I always enjoy reading them!
Well don, KB!
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kathyd65 said:
I’m glad you like it. I do like writing these.
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Dale said:
This was an enjoyable story, Kathy.
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kathyd65 said:
I’m glad you stopped by to read it and that you enjoyed it. I love this writing challenge more than most things.
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Susan A Eames said:
I wonder what they found when they reached the cabin. Nicely intriguing!
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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kathyd65 said:
That chapter is yet to be written. In my mind, because of the angle of that shot, and where I live, I’d reach the crest and find a suburban development… probably abandoned, but houses everywhere! Thanks for reading and for your comment.
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lisarey1990 said:
Great piece.
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kathyd65 said:
Thank you for stopping by to read it.
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jillyfunnell said:
Enter with care – fifteen years is a long time.
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kathyd65 said:
Thanks for your comment, Jilly.
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rochellewisoff said:
Dear Kathy,
A nice snapshot, if you will.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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kathyd65 said:
Thank you, Rochelle! It’s good to be back.
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Kelvin M. Knight's blog said:
Said from a photographer’s angle, at least it read that way to me, Kathy.
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kathyd65 said:
Interesting that you mention ‘photographer’ – I am! Composition and what I can see makes for an interesting tale in a single frame. Thanks for reading my story, and for your comment!
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pennygadd51 said:
That’s a well constructed story. I like the way you move from something that feels like a happy memory to something much darker, with your last nine words turning the whole plot on its head. It may be a happy memory, but the characters are seeking a safe haven.
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kathyd65 said:
Thanks for your comment, Penny! It’s challenging to set up a story (beginning, middle and end) in 100 words, and I like a challenge. I appreciate your taking the time to read it and comment.
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granonine said:
All sorts of twists and turns here. Excellent construction.
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kathyd65 said:
Thank you for reading and for your comment. I love this kind of challenge.
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