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Almost There
Photo Prompt by Karen Rawson
“We’re almost there! 15 years have passed since I last stood in this spot. See that roof? That’s the cabin. That wasn’t visible from this spot, once upon a time. Not sure how we’re gonna get across the muck that was once a gentle, babbling brook. And those steps, once solid and surrounded by a forest of green, look pretty questionable now. That cabin was once a safe haven. My happy, hidden place. It’s not on any map. I hope it’s still safe. Take care and keep your head low, though. The world has changed. It might already be occupied.”
It’s been a while since I’ve made time for the Friday Fictioneers. Here’s my 100 words inspired by the photo. Thanks to Rochelle for keeping it going. Thanks also to Karen for the photo.
snapshots of everything 
I am glad you have returned to writing these snapshots. I always enjoy reading them!
Well don, KB!
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I’m glad you like it. I do like writing these.
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This was an enjoyable story, Kathy.
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I’m glad you stopped by to read it and that you enjoyed it. I love this writing challenge more than most things.
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I wonder what they found when they reached the cabin. Nicely intriguing!
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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That chapter is yet to be written. In my mind, because of the angle of that shot, and where I live, I’d reach the crest and find a suburban development… probably abandoned, but houses everywhere! Thanks for reading and for your comment.
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Great piece.
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Thank you for stopping by to read it.
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Enter with care – fifteen years is a long time.
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Thanks for your comment, Jilly.
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Dear Kathy,
A nice snapshot, if you will.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle! It’s good to be back.
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Said from a photographer’s angle, at least it read that way to me, Kathy.
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Interesting that you mention ‘photographer’ – I am! Composition and what I can see makes for an interesting tale in a single frame. Thanks for reading my story, and for your comment!
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That’s a well constructed story. I like the way you move from something that feels like a happy memory to something much darker, with your last nine words turning the whole plot on its head. It may be a happy memory, but the characters are seeking a safe haven.
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Thanks for your comment, Penny! It’s challenging to set up a story (beginning, middle and end) in 100 words, and I like a challenge. I appreciate your taking the time to read it and comment.
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All sorts of twists and turns here. Excellent construction.
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Thank you for reading and for your comment. I love this kind of challenge.
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